it needs something, give me your ideas
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hmm, maybe to take a shot closser as a portrait, to show more the model, or if she's not the main subject to reduce colours on her and give her a light yellow hue as the landscape has :)
Olya_Lowey | 16 year(s) ago
nice one!
donhosho | 16 year(s) ago
yes its a bit of a clutter of focus and objects and her pose says nothing to us. She is in clothing that makes a statement and looks like should be telling us s story. What you could have done is placed her seated nearer the windmill (there is fencing there too deom what i remember?)...looking out over the scene...as if she lives on the farm and has come out early morning, before all the kids and the husband are up...to just grab her 20 minutes of peace and enjoy her beautiful home before the mayhem starts. I love that warm, glow over the corn, gives a sense of tranquility and she is at odds with that in this scene. Hope that makes sense.
Trixibelle | 16 year(s) ago
You're right.. I like the color very much but the grouping is.. all over the place. I kind of like that shes at odds with the scene.. but maybe that needs to be more pronounced and the color less warm... Hummmm ty all for the feedback... I think I need to find the time to get her back to the Far Away for take two
rhysackmann | 16 year(s) ago
ok i dnot know if i am adding anything to you comments that has not been already said, but i love the absurdity of the women in rollers its great but yeah you need to address teh composistion slightly nice use of teh rule of thirds for the horizon line, but you could possibly move teh camera angle to frame the person or try lowering the horizon line to teh bottom third of the picture and framing within the table windmill and train or possibly use a tighter crop of the picture dunno if im just repeating stuff but love love love the rollers :DD
kalimeads | 16 year(s) ago
ty kal that helps alot... I love that hair as well! Got it at a SL shop called "Curl Up And Dye" - just like the shop in the movie "Earth Girls are Easy" lol and you're all going to see more of it. I'm working on some photos from AM Radios new build The Refuge... I hope to get them up Sunday... darn RL! Thanks again kal
hahaha now ya see Kali...there you go...you are all nitty gritty and here's me trying to make it into marshmallow! And YOU are right ;-) Damnit girl get over here and whip out those flip flops hahaha.
I agree with what everyone else has said. I like the fact that you have thought outside the box with the outfit - for me I think I would have her sitting on the chair and maybe angle the shot so she is looking out across at the field and the train in thought. Tinker with the lighting a little more and perhaps blur the sharpness of the corn.
BBeau [deleted] | 16 year(s) ago
flip flops? whip them out? lol who is i whipping with my filp flops own up !!!! lol
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